The big questions are "how long it will take for updates" since there is only one scene in game now, basically handjob. And also another question is how good scenes will be. There is very few games with 3d where when "somethings" touching each other you see some kind of physics. So now i can and want to say that concept is great, i hope scenes will be great either.
Absolutely love the concept. I've actually set an alarm for the release of this (v0.2) update, but in the end there was no need for the alarm at all.
I must say, though, the dialogue, despite making sense so far, is not at all pleasing to read. It lacks tone, emotion — that scene where Lucy argues with Benjamin did not feel like arguing at all. It would, however, if she where to scream across the living room when she went to her room after walking out. Caps lock, exclamations and overall proper ponctuation would completely change how the dialogue reads. Along with that, you should definitely revise your text before publishing updates to make sure the grammar is right (or, you could try to get someone to do that for you).
Another thing I believe would be worth mentioning is that Benjamin looks unsettling. Not in a "I don't like this guy" way, as I'm sure that would be intended: its model looks off. Benjamin doesn't look like the asshole uncle that anyone would want to fuck over, he looks like the annoying cousin that breaks your shit and tells his mom it was your fault. He looks way too young, his proportions are not really masculine, and with his name being Ben, I can't help but compare him to Ben Shapiro the whole time. I beg of you, please rework his model, or at the very least, its head.
Either way, critique aside, I wish you and your project the best, I'll be looking forward for the updates!
Thank you for your feedback. I've read one already that was very close to yours (I guess it was you). I will work on the points you mentioned, since I agree with most of them. But first I would need to implement planned features and fix the game breaking bugs :D
Perfectly understandable! Assuming it was in f95zone, it most certainly was me, then. Once again, keep up the good work, I'll be gladly following the progress!
Absolutely adore the 3d freedom this game gives. I wish more stuff in the house was interactive, if you're able to visit all rooms freely, maybe you could get a glimpse at the more "personal" side of the women in the house, if y'know what i mean... just little easter eggs or little side quests to make the game a little more entertaining. absolutely adore the demo so far, cant wait to see how this evolves.
First dev I've followed on Itch because this is so high quality! The alpha (v0.0.1) is a higher quality than many "finished" games, I'm excited to see this game grow!
Is there any way to make the game window smaller using hotkeys? For context I am using a widescreen monitor but the disclaimer screen (which I assume has an accept button) cuts off at the bottom of the text, preventing me from actually playing
Anyone else have a bug where mouse and keyboard input dont register or work, At first I thought it was just the intro scene where halfway my stopped mouse working then once I was on the bus my keyboard didn't work.
This is a bug fixed in the 0.0.2 version that is uploaded on the discord. But if you don't want to download it, you can just start a new game and don't change the name of your character. This should be temporary fix for that
I think this is a really good, game, i liked a lot how the characters have the letters on their own heads and the expresions that they do to the situations that are happening, is really short for now the game but i really have high hopes on this proyect
great game wanted to let you know i found a bug that put u on the flood during the drunk sleeping scene seemed to be related to how close you were to the bed i think
It's only 0.0.1 now but it already feels like a beta version. Definitivly will support and follow. This game hits my jam and the characters are attractive and the dialogue is believeable you think you live with a different family. The planned content are a banger.
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Man you're a genius love the game (Even though it has no scenes)
The big questions are "how long it will take for updates" since there is only one scene in game now, basically handjob. And also another question is how good scenes will be. There is very few games with 3d where when "somethings" touching each other you see some kind of physics. So now i can and want to say that concept is great, i hope scenes will be great either.
Absolutely love the concept. I've actually set an alarm for the release of this (v0.2) update, but in the end there was no need for the alarm at all.
I must say, though, the dialogue, despite making sense so far, is not at all pleasing to read. It lacks tone, emotion — that scene where Lucy argues with Benjamin did not feel like arguing at all. It would, however, if she where to scream across the living room when she went to her room after walking out. Caps lock, exclamations and overall proper ponctuation would completely change how the dialogue reads. Along with that, you should definitely revise your text before publishing updates to make sure the grammar is right (or, you could try to get someone to do that for you).
Another thing I believe would be worth mentioning is that Benjamin looks unsettling. Not in a "I don't like this guy" way, as I'm sure that would be intended: its model looks off. Benjamin doesn't look like the asshole uncle that anyone would want to fuck over, he looks like the annoying cousin that breaks your shit and tells his mom it was your fault. He looks way too young, his proportions are not really masculine, and with his name being Ben, I can't help but compare him to Ben Shapiro the whole time. I beg of you, please rework his model, or at the very least, its head.
Either way, critique aside, I wish you and your project the best, I'll be looking forward for the updates!
Thank you for your feedback. I've read one already that was very close to yours (I guess it was you). I will work on the points you mentioned, since I agree with most of them. But first I would need to implement planned features and fix the game breaking bugs :D
Perfectly understandable! Assuming it was in f95zone, it most certainly was me, then. Once again, keep up the good work, I'll be gladly following the progress!
Absolutely adore the 3d freedom this game gives. I wish more stuff in the house was interactive, if you're able to visit all rooms freely, maybe you could get a glimpse at the more "personal" side of the women in the house, if y'know what i mean... just little easter eggs or little side quests to make the game a little more entertaining. absolutely adore the demo so far, cant wait to see how this evolves.
LET'S GOOO
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First dev I've followed on Itch because this is so high quality! The alpha (v0.0.1) is a higher quality than many "finished" games, I'm excited to see this game grow!
Is there any way to make the game window smaller using hotkeys? For context I am using a widescreen monitor but the disclaimer screen (which I assume has an accept button) cuts off at the bottom of the text, preventing me from actually playing
I fixed this bug in the new version that will be out in two weeks. Currently there is no hotkey for that
Can you update discord invite link please?
Any updates?
Anyone else have a bug where mouse and keyboard input dont register or work, At first I thought it was just the intro scene where halfway my stopped mouse working then once I was on the bus my keyboard didn't work.
This is a bug fixed in the 0.0.2 version that is uploaded on the discord. But if you don't want to download it, you can just start a new game and don't change the name of your character. This should be temporary fix for that
Oh ok, thanks
oh this game has a bright future
I think this is a really good, game, i liked a lot how the characters have the letters on their own heads and the expresions that they do to the situations that are happening, is really short for now the game but i really have high hopes on this proyect
how do i fix the graphic
What's wrong with it?
grahic just dropped i cant even read the words
Join the discord and upload a picture in the #bugs channel please, maybe then I can help you
great game wanted to let you know i found a bug that put u on the flood during the drunk sleeping scene seemed to be related to how close you were to the bed i think
Thank you :D
I think i already fixed that bug in the next version :)
So cool! It hurts the demo is so short... Can't wait for more!
this demo has more quality that some full games
M O R E
Great beginning ! please more <3
more please
Great game, and for a version 0.0.1 it's fantastic, congratulations, this game has a lot of future.
It's only 0.0.1 now but it already feels like a beta version. Definitivly will support and follow. This game hits my jam and the characters are attractive and the dialogue is believeable you think you live with a different family. The planned content are a banger.
This game has peak potential in my eyes. !!!